Mary's Idea Rough Cut

Screen Shot from Mary's Idea

A few months ago my cousin Mary shared an idea for alittle film based on a story she made up for her grandkids. We worked together to make it move and today I compleated the rough cut. Mary and her grandkids are the voice actors. I think there are things I can do to tighten it up but will hold off for a month or so to get a fresh perspective. Here is the link

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1QaWfQGHZFENRyL8-b_AQExpEDYd_t4om/view?usp=sharing